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Hear me read it!

A touch without invasion.
  That ever elusive exhale of love in the skies.

The quiet stateliness
of fingers searching palms
  He held my hand.

A kiss without allusion.
  The constant thrum of light specks chasing sun rise.

The tenderest smile
of knowing, to be known.
  She held my heart.

The patient sun without intrusion
  Lit the world aflame through devotion in their eyes.
This isn't actually a romantic letter, for me at least, per se... It was written as a thank you and to express my love for two people on deviantART who support me and who believe in me so deeply... I am starting to come round to their opinion of my work... it only took them like... 5 years. :giggle:

:iconladylincoln: :icondreamsinstatic: :rose:
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razorfrost Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow,It is quite short yet your few words have great passion...
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
:blush: Thank you so much
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razorfrost Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Pleasure'a all mine [link]
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... well - at least it's not the last poem you'll ever read! :iconscaredplz:

Since we survived the end of the world, I thought I'd comment on another one of your Hear me read it! pieces. :huggle:

This certainly shows your love for those that have been devoted to you... in fact, it proves your own devotion to them. I'm not sure I've met =dreamsinstatic, but I know for a fact that `LadyLincoln is a lovely woman.

You've paid them both great homage with this piece... & you have a very lovely speaking voice. :iconrubcheeksplz:

:heart: *OfOneSoul
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Giggles, yay! And yes they are incredible. Watch DIS. He has amazing features of lit and other art, and he is such a thoughtful commenter and critiquer on top of being an awesome guy.
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... totally all over that. :iconfuckyeahplz:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Giggles!
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
This is so lovely! :heart: In fact I had a kind of similar idea somewhere in my head.. to write a piece dedicated to the amazing people who support me constantly here on dA.. great job! :love:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Do it :] Its very rewarding! :D
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
I'll wait for the inspiration to come and reach me..:giggle:
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