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Hear me read it!

A touch without invasion.
  That ever elusive exhale of love in the skies.

The quiet stateliness
of fingers searching palms
  He held my hand.

A kiss without allusion.
  The constant thrum of light specks chasing sun rise.

The tenderest smile
of knowing, to be known.
  She held my heart.

The patient sun without intrusion
  Lit the world aflame through devotion in their eyes.
This isn't actually a romantic letter, for me at least, per se... It was written as a thank you and to express my love for two people on deviantART who support me and who believe in me so deeply... I am starting to come round to their opinion of my work... it only took them like... 5 years. :giggle:

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razorfrost Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow,It is quite short yet your few words have great passion...
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
:blush: Thank you so much
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razorfrost Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Pleasure'a all mine [link]
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... well - at least it's not the last poem you'll ever read! :iconscaredplz:

Since we survived the end of the world, I thought I'd comment on another one of your Hear me read it! pieces. :huggle:

This certainly shows your love for those that have been devoted to you... in fact, it proves your own devotion to them. I'm not sure I've met =dreamsinstatic, but I know for a fact that `LadyLincoln is a lovely woman.

You've paid them both great homage with this piece... & you have a very lovely speaking voice. :iconrubcheeksplz:

:heart: *OfOneSoul
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Giggles, yay! And yes they are incredible. Watch DIS. He has amazing features of lit and other art, and he is such a thoughtful commenter and critiquer on top of being an awesome guy.
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... totally all over that. :iconfuckyeahplz:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Giggles!
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
This is so lovely! :heart: In fact I had a kind of similar idea somewhere in my head.. to write a piece dedicated to the amazing people who support me constantly here on dA.. great job! :love:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Do it :] Its very rewarding! :D
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Pen-and-mouse Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
I'll wait for the inspiration to come and reach me..:giggle:
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WinterLeave Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How lovely and kind!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
:D They are kind to me :}
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SpiralWillow Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
thats so sweet
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
:rose: Thank you
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SpiralWillow Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem
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Shijou4U Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww, that was so nice. I love your poems and I love your accent. :iconsmutfaceplz: The way you said, "The End of the world was just so... :iconhappyhappyplz:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Giggles, I don't even know what I did because thats just how I speak but people say this kind of stuff to be a lot, so I am shameless whoring my british accent to publicise my work. Laughs.
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Shijou4U Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really, your voice is really beautiful though. :D Accents can really come as an advantage sometimes, this counts as one. :iconcutiesmileplz:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Giggles, this is getting addictive!
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Shijou4U Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's a good thing. :D I can't really praise enough because someone's voice can really make an impact you know.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Giggles, posted two more today :D
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Shijou4U Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm gonna' go check them out now. :iconblushingplz:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Yay :excited: haha.
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augumon05 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
another, huh?
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
I write alot, sorry
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augumon05 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
not that. writing a lot is fine, the themes are just starting to seem along the same area of life.
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's beautiful and breathtaking.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
gosh thank you!! :D
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! You're a truly talented writer, you know. :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Gosh.. I get so blushy and stupidly tongue tied when people say those things :']
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's true! :)
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist
It's very nice, very sweet.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
:heart:
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist
<3
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is truly and uniquely lovely.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
smiles shyly, thank you!
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... *smiling* its a sweet work.

Reminds me of Russian romantics - very crisp, but as sweet as they come.

'Nuff said.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Wow thank you so much!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :)
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely piece. I like how much is expressed in each small stanza.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
smiles, thank you! I really appreciate that :))
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome
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OniOfTheShade Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012   General Artist
Such passion!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Grins, well they have helped me through *a lot* and deserve adoring. :]
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FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
amazing you can really feel the emotions behind the words :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
grins, thank you!
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FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
no problem :)
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TitoRoxas-CotoUchiha Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, may I say it is beautiful? Because undoubtably, it is. Even if you didn't meant to make it look as a love letter, it still has that heart-warming sensation... Thank you for letting me, once more, have a little warm in my frozen and beated up heart. :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
blushes, thank you! It is a love letter its just not romantic (on my side, it might be on the readers!) Its about the friendship kind of love and kinship :}
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