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Life is full of fireworks;
a brief moment of art
imitating the stars -
They are not stars.
Stars are born, they burn,
they die.
Fireworks are merely
promises made and
not kept.
When a fleeting time
of light and  beauty
pretends
that the darkness is not so.
Urgh.
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Roshiray Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
oh how lovely,and still it's cutting me..thanks Hug 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
:tighthug: Thank you
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exoticfirefly Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Life is full of fireworks
life is a brief moment of art
life imitates the stars

fireworks are not stars?

Each life is like one firework?
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Nods. This is a metaphor for loves, lives. Comparing the brief intense feelings of love that fade, when someone is untrue, to the pure love I had with my sister who passed away.
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diichan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful; loving your wordage.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
:giggle: Thank you!
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Oseltamivir Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Read this while spending the night at an airport alone.  Probably because of that, I got a very strong sense of loneliness from your poem.  Beautiful writing; this one speaks to me.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
:tighthug: It was a very lonely night. Sat outside in the cold watching fireworks unintentionally. Thinking about people who've died.

Are you okay? I know I'm a long time late with my reply...
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Oseltamivir Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I am (was) okay. Thanks for asking.  I was having issues with some of my family, and was stuck in an airport for eleven hours that night.  It was very quiet in the airport and lonely to be there in that state of mind.  Here's to no more of such nights for either of us, and happy New Year to you =)
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Flawless :heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
Thanks!!
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MeredyxD Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist
Amazing metaphor lovely :heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Thank you!
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IamDreamfire Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
Wow great 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
:D Thanks!
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IamDreamfire Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
Pleasure!
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
The things you do with words…
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
:love: Aw!!! :blush:
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EAT-TOAST Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Writer

I think someone has been listening to Katy Perry lately ^^

 

 

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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
...........?
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EAT-TOAST Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Writer
The new roar song about voicing your own opinion even through it may seen strange to others, and not letting others keep you down ^D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
I know the song I'm just baffled on how its related, haha, but I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
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EAT-TOAST Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Writer

The song is just so popular right now XD

 

and yw :D

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BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good concept.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Thanks :>
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ForgottenFears Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
This is very beautiful and well written.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Thank you!
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ForgottenFears Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
You're welcome.
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blenderous Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful! how momentary happiness can be, and the realization, even worse...
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Nods. Horrible
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MisterTotality Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
And just like fireworks, promises which are made and not kept blind us momentarily.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Nods
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Writer
I agree.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
:love: :tighthug:
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Writer
:iconfatpandaplz:
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Imperial-Radiance Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So lovely. :heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Thank you :rose:
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Imperial-Radiance Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :hug:
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WinterLeave Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing, Kate!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Thank you :rose:
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WinterLeave Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Garrison-Kelly Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully written, my dear.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Thank you :rose:
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Garrison-Kelly Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :hug:
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pascal-prevost Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Nice text
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Thank you :rose:
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pascal-prevost Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
:rose:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Lovely and profound...
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Thank you so much :rose:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Professional Writer
You are most welcome... :aww:
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