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Life is full of fireworks;
a brief moment of art
imitating the stars -
They are not stars.
Stars are born, they burn,
they die.
Fireworks are merely
promises made and
not kept.
When a fleeting time
of light and  beauty
pretends
that the darkness is not so.
Urgh.
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Roshiray Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
oh how lovely,and still it's cutting me..thanks Hug 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
:tighthug: Thank you
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exoticfirefly Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Life is full of fireworks
life is a brief moment of art
life imitates the stars

fireworks are not stars?

Each life is like one firework?
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Nods. This is a metaphor for loves, lives. Comparing the brief intense feelings of love that fade, when someone is untrue, to the pure love I had with my sister who passed away.
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diichan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful; loving your wordage.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
:giggle: Thank you!
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Oseltamivir Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Read this while spending the night at an airport alone.  Probably because of that, I got a very strong sense of loneliness from your poem.  Beautiful writing; this one speaks to me.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
:tighthug: It was a very lonely night. Sat outside in the cold watching fireworks unintentionally. Thinking about people who've died.

Are you okay? I know I'm a long time late with my reply...
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Oseltamivir Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I am (was) okay. Thanks for asking.  I was having issues with some of my family, and was stuck in an airport for eleven hours that night.  It was very quiet in the airport and lonely to be there in that state of mind.  Here's to no more of such nights for either of us, and happy New Year to you =)
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Flawless :heart:
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