Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconbloodshotink: More from BloodshotInk


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
July 21, 2013
File Size
943 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
1,640
Favourites
62 (who?)
Comments
51
Downloads
0
×
Hear me read it!

In debris beside your house
there's the rotting stench of home,
where all the ghosts of lovers
and their broken chances go.

You smile at me, I shiver.
I taste your tongue on mine.
There's no dead for the sympathy
as you trespass bound'ry lines.

In the broken bulb of midnight
when the caskets rock to sleep
there beneath the soil bed
you lay me down, I weep.

You smile at me, I wonder
as you pin me underneath
if you know how I wish that I
were six feet more beneath.

In the soiled marital bed
where pigs and otters go to lie
you grunt your way to release
the only release I want, is to die.
Consummation, the act of having sex to seal the deal of marriage - or an experience of being unwillingly consumed. You decide.

♥ Kathryn O'Driscoll © 2013

All rights reserved. All the materials contained in my deviantART gallery may NOT be used, reproduced, copied, edited, published, transmitted, borrowed, duplicated, printed, downloaded, or uploaded in any way without my express written permission, however feel free to contact me should you desire to use my work - as I love to share.


~ tumblr ~ facebook ~ twitter
Add a Comment:
 

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconcskadoz:
cskadoz Aug 3, 2013   General Artist
great imagery, tone and pace! all better by your voice -- gyawd, i love your voice! :hug:
Reply
:iconbloodshotink:
Giggles, well thank you!
Reply
:iconoseltamivir:
Oseltamivir Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a great piece of poetry.  I can relate in a way.  Makes me sad, but that just means you did a good job writing it.
Reply
:iconbloodshotink:
:tighthug: Thank you so much
Reply
:iconnearlyinvisiblemind:
NearlyInvisibleMind Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am awestruck and, therefor, can come up with nothing great to say other than that this piece is disturbingly superb.:clap:
Reply
:iconbloodshotink:
Aw, thank you! For superb and disturbing :D As now I know people are really understanding it
Reply
:iconnearlyinvisiblemind:
NearlyInvisibleMind Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome:frail:
...Indeed:blackrose:
Reply
:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When I read this, I thought it read somewhat like a murder ballad, until I got to the last two stanzas. In response to your question, the answer is yes. The deal is sealed...and she is consumed in turn.
Reply
:iconbloodshotink:
Nods.. for me its not about two different topics, its about one situation that involves both. you know.
Reply
:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I get what you mean. This one was powerful, as always with your work.
Reply
Add a Comment: