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Wrists skyward she began to beg; "Please, Please God, I can't do this anymore. I don't want to be.. a prophet, or a messenger of peace and love or whatever it was that you sent her to me so that I would become. I don't.. I can't.." she broke off, broke down, and her mind crumbled around the excruciating wondering if she was experiencing a new type of crucifixion. If God existed, and if he was purposefully keeping her in pain for a bigger plan, and if, ultimately, she would ever know the luxury of a spinal cord snapping open and exposing the bare wires beneath.

She pressed her hand over her mouth to keep the words inside, and when the tears landed on her fingers and hung for extended moments before they fell, it looked like ivy creeping over the door of a great empty house. Her eyes so dark and lonely. The shaking shed the ivy leafs and when she spoke it was as if a random series of words had tumbled out from the hurricane inside, a cough, a wretch, a sentence; "I think I'm dying".
"I T I D"

♥ Kathryn O'Driscoll © 2013

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LoveyLoo Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, my word... I'm gonna cry now... :crying: rvmp 
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LoveyLoo Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was so sad... You captured it really well.
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SMAdams Aug 9, 2013  Student Writer
:hug: The emotion and pain you have expressed in this piece is heartbreaking. Well done. 
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:tighthug: Thank you, it was a very bad day
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SMAdams Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
I am sorry. I can understand. 
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:iconbasilisa0ff:
Beautifully dark :)
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:iconbloodshotink:
Thank you :D Was a dark night.
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:icongloryangel:
This kind of encompasses why I am an aethiest; you can SCREAM for help but god (if there is one) ignores you.
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that end....
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