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Wrists skyward she began to beg; "Please, Please God, I can't do this anymore. I don't want to be.. a prophet, or a messenger of peace and love or whatever it was that you sent her to me so that I would become. I don't.. I can't.." she broke off, broke down, and her mind crumbled around the excruciating wondering if she was experiencing a new type of crucifixion. If God existed, and if he was purposefully keeping her in pain for a bigger plan, and if, ultimately, she would ever know the luxury of a spinal cord snapping open and exposing the bare wires beneath.

She pressed her hand over her mouth to keep the words inside, and when the tears landed on her fingers and hung for extended moments before they fell, it looked like ivy creeping over the door of a great empty house. Her eyes so dark and lonely. The shaking shed the ivy leafs and when she spoke it was as if a random series of words had tumbled out from the hurricane inside, a cough, a wretch, a sentence; "I think I'm dying".
"I T I D"

♥ Kathryn O'Driscoll © 2013

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LoveyLoo Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, my word... I'm gonna cry now... :crying: rvmp 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
:tighthug: I'm sorry!
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LoveyLoo Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It was so sad... You captured it really well.
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SMAdams Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: The emotion and pain you have expressed in this piece is heartbreaking. Well done. 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
:tighthug: Thank you, it was a very bad day
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SMAdams Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am sorry. I can understand. 
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Basilisa0ff Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Beautifully dark :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
Thank you :D Was a dark night.
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GloryAngel Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
This kind of encompasses why I am an aethiest; you can SCREAM for help but god (if there is one) ignores you.
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that end....
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Was a very bad night
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: I hope things are better now.
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deathnote177 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student General Artist
This is amazing xD
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
god, thank you so much
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deathnote177 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   Writer
Oh lovely, I don't know what inspired this....but :hug:
Your description of the tears like ivy - so unique yet so true as they cling wherever they please.
Like I said, I don't know what inspired this....but I can relate to it in my own way.
:heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:tighthug: was a broken down day. :tighthug:
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gah, what a piece. <3
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
I really liked this one so much but I wrote so much that day it got overlooked. Shameeee </3 Thanks for taking the time :tighthug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I see why you liked this! :D
Aw, I see.

My pleasure, as always. :tighthug:
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ERaven77 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very interesting. It flows nicely...
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Thank you! :love:
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ERaven77 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome.. :)
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InDecentSeas Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It was interesting to watch the transformation from that original post. The first paragraph certainly adds another level of depth. Nicely done, and edited. :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:giggle: I was in a really bad place but yeah I edited it like three times. haha
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