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Your spine is a secret
my fingers can uncode.
Your vertebrae cracks open,
your secrets are exposed.

I suck out the tender marrow
and scrape flesh off the bone
hoping; if I absorb you
I will no longer feel alone.
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JadedStrayHyena Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh. They say the best way to someone's heart is through their stomach, but I'm not sure this is what they meant. I like it.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
:) Thank you!
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shep4life Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow...very intense
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
Thank you :rose:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course!
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Jabberwoc Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
It's not a comedy! But I like it!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
:D Yay
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TheBloodWriter Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student Writer
So macabre. Love it.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
:D YAY! Thank you!
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Emorockchic Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
I loved this and the creepiness!! It spoke to me in a whole different level...
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
not creepy to me. desperately longing to feel alive and belonging to someone.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Nods...
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Professional Writer
Goodness!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Bad or good?
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It kind of makes me cringe on how...creepy this feels. Creepy and vicious, almost. But it's really good and makes you think.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
I AM CREEPY. lol.
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scarletwave Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
this is wide open and honest,
simple yet deep
short and to the point
straight through my heart.

I could not love you any more.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
:tighthug: and I love you :tighthug:
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InDecentSeas Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I certainly enjoyed this one. The images conjured are nice and creepy, and it reminded me of Hellraiser. Frank has to drain the blood of other people to restore his own body and be brought back to life. This reminded me of a few of those scenes. Thanks for that. It's my favorite horror flick!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
:giggle: Yay! Awesome, thank you so much!
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InDecentSeas Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank YOU!
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FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Brilliant :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
:love: Why thank you!
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FoxofEbony Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
You're welcome :D
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Such strong images!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
:love: Thank you
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013   General Artist
:worship: this rocks! so desperate and over the edge! love it!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
:) Thank you so much!
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goldenchaseD Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Artist
It's amazing..
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
:love: Thank you :blush:
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JessenoSabaku Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love metaphors having to do with bones.
I don't know why, but they're always easier for me to relate with.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
:giggle: me too
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Creepy. Feels like I can see it happening.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Awesome!
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It is. :)
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Breathtaking, darling. :heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
:D thank you sweetie
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome, love.

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TarosMyr Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013   Writer
So visceral.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
:) thank you
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing job, Kathryn. Stunning works, as always. <3
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
:love: thank youu
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. <3
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