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She is electrolytes
pulsating a charge through his veins,
shocking him to the dehydrated tissue
wrapped around his heart core,
and though he thirsts for her
and the magnetic spark
in those salted caramel eyes -
he resists the attraction
and retreats to a self imposed cell
of solitude.
My friend =SovereignSin challenged me to write a meaningful poem about electrolytes. So I tried... Suck my lucozade bitch ! <3

♥ Kathryn O'Driscoll © 2013

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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I absolutely love "salted caramel eyes." Love.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Grins, yay! Thank you :D!
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NekoNekoGirl997 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Perfection!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Yay! thank you :]
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Professional Writer
I like the imagery this creates...
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
yay! me too :D
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Another amazing piece. :heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
:love:
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TarosMyr Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   Writer
Ugh. Stop. Writing. Poems. About. My. Life! ;)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
laughs, okay I'll try! 
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