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You are a hemorrhage. You are the violent implosion of my blood under my skin that makes it itch like I am morphine-high. You are my blood seeping from arteries into artillery and shooting holes through my over-ripened heart. You are the snarl on my lip and scars across my forearms that burst open when I over reach my capabilities. You are the writhing groaning dying beast in my ribbed cage that aches for a kill. If I released you, you would snap my neck and watch me spurt out the only truth between us; my blood. You are venom and sap, holding my structure together from otherwise limp apathy but nonetheless you are poison, and how I hate you, hatred.
I hate anger, I hate hatred. This is a poem about HATING HATRED and anger and jealousy and just wanting to be violent and out of control because people won't stop fucking me over.
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DesterFawgrold Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
I hate you and I hate all the disgusting humanity.
P.S. great text,super.
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amberwell Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Powerful words.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Thank you, they were heartfelt
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frenchmintviolins Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, I love the vocabulary~! I wish I could write that good and I just wanted to say I'm truly impressed with your writing :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
:blush: Thank you so much!!
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Yuri-fan-23 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
Please excuse the weird face in the corner, i couldn't d-click it :/
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
haha
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Yuri-fan-23 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
There aren't many out there who can describe emotions with words but you pulled it of, I hope things get better :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Thank you so much!
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razorfrost Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Well I can relate....must say that this pain makes for great inspiration,thank you so much for writing this honoust piece,wish I could say that quality was aplicable to the "ones" who betray us.......
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