I'm desperate to find her
to steal another kiss.
should be simpler than this.
Only small but I like the rhythm of this one.
This is... This is always in my head, thank you for being as amazing as you are to share this
I like it, you're definitely right about the rhythm. You know what I really like is that it has a little taste of that plaintive tone that guys get sometimes, if you know what I'm talking about. very nice. keep it up.
I love this!
The rythm is indeed amazing
All I can think of is Once Upon a Time aaaahhhh I love Charming he's great
wow, nice words.
This is really really sweet Short but awesome
Very nicely put together!
so amazing. what you have done is called in hindi as 'gagar mein sagar bharna' that means describing so much ia so little.
Excellent rhyme and rhythm - but maybe Charming is too busy with Snow White?
So small, but still packing a punch.
Amazing. I love this
Sometimes small poems can pack a big punch...
Wow, I really like this one
Ah, but its not worth it if you don't work for it
Remarkable rhythm and rhyme, indeed.
Ah, fairy tales... No matter what they still touch our soft spot.
LOVE this. So cute. XD
I kind of feel like this needs to be part of a rock song. o.O