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It's clear to see
that I'm as fragile
as glass -
and every time
that you look through me;
I crack up.
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exoticfirefly Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I love short and to the point poems.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
me too! :D
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Dragkor Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
in which way should i understand this?
Nice scrap :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
That I like him, he doesnt like me.
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ActsofArt Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this clever bit of writing has landed in my most recent feature fav.me/d6uwhje please check it out!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
THANKS :D
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ActsofArt Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
clever, interesting and ambiguous enough to have multiple meanings, your writing is making me jealous.
Well done :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
:D Thank you so so much!!
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the unease with which the final line left me.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
yay! Phew. Thank you :D
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