The word play in this is clever. "Clear to see…glass…look through me…" Plus I like the last line because it makes the ending so ambiguous. There is room for various interpretations. Is it irony, sarcasm or emotional fragility? The reader is left to decide.
dragonet98Featured By OwnerNov 3, 2013Hobbyist General Artist
How in the world you manage to put into words these subtle little things I have absolutely no idea, but there's one thing I can tell you and it's that I love love love it. You just know exactly which words to use, what expressions. To me, (I don't even know where this came from,) your writing is like a clear glass sphere- transparent, but magnifying certain things that would be just small details if you left it to anyone else. So this piece pretty much made me think of your writing. Even to the cracking up part. You inspire me and make me despair all at once. You jumpstart my muse, yet you make me set my standards so high I'll never be able to write something that satisfies me. And I'm pretty much rambling here so I'll stop, but consider this my informal critique.