My English is not really good enough to leave a critique, but I still would like to say something.
I really like how you use sliver and gold. It's quite clever. I will try to explain this as best as I can in English, but basically even if I gave something precious to someone I ended up hating, I still wouldn't want it back, because that leaves space for new things, better things, like a dandelion growing in the quarry. I dunno if that made sense, but I'd rather have a few small dandelions than old silver (Unless it's literal silver and dandelions. MUHNEHS! YESH!)
This is quite a beautiful concept. I really like your use silver and gold here.
I'd like my silver back, but at the same time I don't. Those pieces of myself I've shared with others were given in love. I'd rather not tarnish that with hate, especially for something I can never take back.