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sparrowchild;
lay down
in the vestibule
of bracken and bargaining
and in your swan song
tell me the truth -
why does a sparrowchild
cry?
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Vestibule of bracken. :heart:
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:icondamagedhomewrecker:
DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i just love the simplicity of this, how beautiful it is, the juxtaposition of sparrow/swan. just lovely.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
:tighthug: Oh thank you :]
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
because the songbirds told her she's not allowed to make any other sounds.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
I know them feels
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Vvlad-vVolfen Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How will you know it's the truth?

(Perhaps that's why they cry....)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Thats true
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
It cries because tears are unavoidable sometimes :(
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Nods
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Professional Writer
Good poetry and good question... :hug:
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