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She wears pink and I wear out.
You say its not like that, I'm about
ready to get up and shout
that I love you;

and nothing she could do or say
would make my heart look away,
it's only you who's gone astray,
'cos I loved you


You choose anything but me.
Not how this was meant to be.
Anything but me,
so what am I

what am I left with?



and I get that you are moving on
and it's me who don't belong
but I can't believe that its wrong
to still love you

an' now she's making up your bed,
the mem'ries locked up in my head;
I choose to live with them instead
'cos I love you.


You choose anything but me.
Not how this was meant to be.
Anything but me,
so what am I

what am I left with?



I can smile and say okay
and keep on moving on that way
but I'll always hope you'll turn and say;
'I love you'.

and I'll hope for better, hope for more,
hope that you walking out the door
doesn't leave my heart broke and sore
'cos I loved you.


You choose anything but me.
Not how this was meant to be.
Anything but me,
so what am I

what am I left with?



Left broken. Left center.
Left me here to remember.
Left outside. Left - goodbye!
Let go and say goodnight
- It's over.
I suck at singing and play no musical instruments but this is a song that attacked my brain this morning so there you go. If you have any musical composition skills at all feel free to try and write a tune, I can't share the one that I wrote it to because I suckkk. Anyway. yeah.

Not as intricate as my poetry/prose because its a song so its.. different. idk.

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Kathryn O'Driscoll 2013


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dreamsinstatic May 10, 2013  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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nightshade-keyblade Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Or you could recite this with music in the background, the way Tony Jay did with Poets on Broadway. His cover of September Song gets to me every time.
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veronicle Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i started humming a tune but i wouldnt be able to play it, im still trying to find someone to teach me guitar
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So I legit sat here for close to 15 minutes trying to get a good tune to it XD
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6-9Changeling Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE ITTT!
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6-9Changeling Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconsuperw00tplz:
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WinterLeave Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very pretty!
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