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Hear me read it

I am crack'd. Open to the pit
with the nub and root exposed.
I am silver pierced and punctured
with holes and protruding pieces
of rocked raw wounds rubbed open.

I am barely shattering my lungs
by inhaling the same air as you
even long after your departure.
With a bile-laced smile I pave
and fill in crack and crevices

I am more than disfigured limbs
and disillusioned heart muscle,
scraping a breath down my trachea.
More than the mess you have made.
I hold in my innards, and survive.
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astrangeallure Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderfully written. :heart:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Thank you so much!!
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kloe-oki Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Whoa...:iconspeechlessplz:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Thanks :D
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kloe-oki Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
Welcome :)
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SuperFancySquid Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Your a really good writer :3
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
:D Thank you!!
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natyxox Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Original and very detailed! Awesome work :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Thank you so much :tighthug:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Professional Writer
Wonderful imagery this invokes...
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