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If you can flutter
I have failed you,
for you were not forged
to be so insubstantial as that

You were writ
to be an epic fable
of endurance,
of endings ignored,

of outlasting your body
through the sheer will
of a writers starving heart
pumping genium

through a broken, bowed
but bravely abiding body
that fights the soul
to comprehend Beauty.
I wrote this inspired by a poem called The Wasting Game by Philip Gross which is about anorexia. I know two incredible guys, both insanely talented writers who happen to be physically drop dead gorgeous as well as really intelligent engaging friends to talk to - and the combination of that poem and the way I feel about the way those guys feel about themselves - created this.

I would prefer not to name one of the guys this is about, he has read this but he doesn't share his work here and so I don't want to open up his private life in a public forum. But the second guy is my beautiful writing hubby (xD) ~Konjuku who wrote this INCREDIBLE poem which is so painful... so so painful to read. So I recommend you do :P so this is half for him too.
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EAT-TOAST Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Writer
Yeah, I agree that it is unfortunate to have a condition such as being anorexic but I think they will have a much better time coping with it with a great friend like you helping them out. 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Aw, thank you! I hope so.
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
what does genium mean?

Its a beautiful poem - I like the way that the last stanza is stating everything about what makes a person... amazing, in anyone's eyes (and in particular, yours). I don't have anything particularly constructive to write, but I'll let it pass because this poem does speak for itself.

Well done :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
It is another KOD word, it means the chemical in the blood that causes geniusness.
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh... alright :) Nice.

All in all, its a good work. I honestly like it.
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful <3 Well done.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Thank you so much :)
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Beautiful poem. :)
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Thanks!
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