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0hgravity, if by some divine fortune you should decide that today is the day you will fail me, then let me soar through the ChemicalSkyline. Grant me a-lovely-anxiety that raises a storm InTheStarryNightSky for me to riseandbe above all else. Let me soar.

How I long to be the frail rider-on-the-storm and not a victim of the RoamingShadow, Rogue-Of-The-Night, that BlackVelvetNightmare of my nights and days. I long for awaytobefree, won't you grant it to me?

I desire to be great, to feel greatness, to be more than one of many Sad-Writers spinning Sacred-Literature into SanguineEpitaph after saturninesweetness. scarletwave of Scarlettletters for cheapexposure cannot express a Rush-Of-Emotions. I long to trap Love and BeautyinthePages I write. Love is not a sentienttree growing stoically in your back garden under hushed-lullabies until shebids you notice her. She is not.

ShePaintsWithBlood, thetaoofchaos. The harbringer of doom. TheCriticofInnocence. Love is a prickled mistress. Be not Beholdentolove, she is a hedgehog, snuffling around the russiansunflowers, seeking out the Things-Not-Seen amongst TheAutumnCrocus thorns, will you find TheWritersDen and expose TheTragicTruth-Of-Me, TheWaywordWriter?

I think you shall, I do not trust you, Love. truly-you-will-do whatever you can to ToxxicAsphyxiate your TwistedChildren. You will let them WriteFromTheHeart, rip Words-From-The-Heart until their hearts are empty oyster shells. You seek to destroy us.

But We-The-Artists, We-Write-To-Escape. We cannot be waylaid by the Utter-Insanity of ValentineHearts.

We will Defy-the-fates. We will collidewiththesirens. It is our exquisiteoath to FightToWrite with inked swords and origami Battledress. Allies-In-Art we seek the UnspecifiedUnknown, the UntamedUnwanted, the DistortedSmile hiding a deviousdarkheart. For DeathIsOnlyDarkness unless our DarkSentences, our EchosOfSouls, live on after us.

So no, Love, you will not defeat me. Whether you break or bend me at your will I will transcend, and use your weapons against you, CrushGoddess "Love" and utilise you; poeticimmortal. You may flyonmywing, Love. For I will fly high above yours.

ForMyMuse can trap love in A-Fistful-Of-Pages. I do not fear love, for love fears me, J-u-d-a-s, who will betray love and trap it in a cage of paper, the-real-vault. The pen is mightier than the heart, my Love. thelifeofwords. I will bury you, with little-bird-bones. My words will echo eternally, long after love is dead. Live-Love-Write.


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- namenotrequired, IAmPoetry.
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Summary: Love sucks, lets do poetry instead.

You may have noticed I wrote this using primarily names of people I watch. There is no preference to the people, I just used what inspired me and what worked with the theme. I blatantly stole this idea from puzzledheartbox: and then he didn't even get a mention. What a witch! Sorry!

:icon0hgravity::iconchemicalskyline::icona-lovely-anxiety: :iconinthestarrynightsky: :iconriseandbe::iconfrail: :iconrider-on-the-storm: :iconroamingshadow: :iconrogue-of-the-night: :iconblackvelvetnightmare: :iconawaytobefree::iconsad-writers: :iconsacred-literature: :iconsanguineepitaph: :iconsaturninesweetness: :iconscarletwave: :iconscarlettletters: :iconcheapexposure: :iconrush-of-emotions::iconbeautyinthepages: :iconsentienttree::iconhushed-lullabies: :iconshebid::iconshepaintswithblood: :iconthetaoofchaos: :iconthecriticofinnocence: :iconbeholdentolove: :iconrussiansunflowers::iconthings-not-seen: :icontheautumncrocus: :iconthorns::iconthewritersden: :iconthetragictruth-of-me::iconthewaywordwriter: :icontruly-you-will-do: :icontoxxicasphyxiate: :icontwistedchildren: :iconwritefromtheheart::iconwords-from-the-heart:But :iconwe-the-artists: :iconwe-write-to-escape: :iconutter-insanity: :iconvalentinehearts::icondefy-the-fates::iconcollidewiththesirens::iconexquisiteoath::iconfighttowrite: :iconbattledress: :iconallies-in-art::iconunspecifiedunknown::iconuntamedunwanted::icondistortedsmile: :icondeviousdarkheart::icondeathisonlydarkness::icondarksentences::iconechosofsouls::iconcrushgoddess::iconpoeticimmortal::iconflyonmywing::iconformymuse: :icona-fistful-of-pages::iconj-u-d-a-s: :iconthe-real-vault: :iconthelifeofwords: :iconlittle-bird-bones::iconlive-love-write::iconhopeyouguessedmyname: :iconnamenotrequired: :iconiampoetry:
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KarmicCircle Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Professional General Artist
this is AWESOME!!!
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The-Golden-Knight Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
I love how you use peoples' profile names for your work! :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
:giggle: Some people have EXCELLENT names!!!
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SurrealCachinnation Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013   Writer
Wow.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
! thanks :D
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The-Black-Pheonix Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student General Artist
This is amazing!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
Thanks!!
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miontre Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:lol: Good one!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
:giggle:
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CodeName-Insanity Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
you're a genious!!!!!!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
giggles, thanks!
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EJwhiskers Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
that is really clever omg
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
:giggle: Thank you
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EJwhiskers Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome c:
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imperfect-parachute Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Writer
This is really clever! Very well written, flows beautifully!
Very well done!
And thanks for using the name of my group too! Hahaha =D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
I'm late responding because April hates me, I apologise :[


Thank you! and you are welcome haha
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student Writer
:faint: You have a way of crafting words...I wouldn't even be able to wrap my head around the idea, much less to actually write it.

P.S. Have you heard about my contest?
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
okay I'm sorry I couldn't resist :lmao: sorry. Thank you :] You are so kind! I'll look at your contest in the morning :D !
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks, hun.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
Have you heard about Our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ?
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Student Writer
....:no:(smh)...:thumbsup:(yup)
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LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
That was epic!!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
I'm late responding because April hates me, I apologise :[

laughs! Thanks :D
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LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
Heh it's okay!!:3
Np!
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mahatmandie Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
Yeheee! I love it! (:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
yayy! :D
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Willis-Crisp Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
Really eloquent ;) Well done!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:)) Thanks Willis!
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Willis-Crisp Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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Sapphire-Arkenstone Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is amazing. :clap:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:blush: Thanks!
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Sapphire-Arkenstone Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome. :hug:
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me-molester Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Professional Filmographer
you're amazing!^^ :dalove:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
nuh uh! :D
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TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student General Artist
I am greatly honored that you would use my name in such a great poem.

Anyone that can use that variety of names and still make a pome like this should be applauded.:clap:

Interesting, how you use each name... and it still flows quite well. It ties all us writers together, in a way...
For the ingenious use of usernames, the great subject of the poem(that writing transcends the pains and trappings of Love) and the merit of the poem itself...
Verdict: Transcendentally Perfect.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:blush: Thank you! Giggles. I have some awesomely named people on my watch list :D !

Thank you so much :>
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TheCriticofInnocence Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student General Artist
You're very welcome.
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
InTheStarryNightSky, RiseandBe, Scarlettletters, and Untamed Unwanted are my favorites! :heart:
DearPoetry is another AMAZING poet. You should check her out :D
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Haha these aren't all the people I watch, just ones that worked in :>
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah okay, :)
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DistortedSmile Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Love this! :love:
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
yayyyy
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scarletwave Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Ohu, this is really some kind of magical work of beauty. You are both writer and engineer:#1: Nice, Miss Kathryn...

I think I love you.

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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:giggle: I love you right back!
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scarletwave Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
:aww:
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saturninesweetness Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aha!

This is insanely clever. Props to you; I can only imagine how much time you put into this!
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:D! Thanks :giggle:
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Zevais Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist
No you are tempting me to make my username usable in a sentence.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
:giggle:
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Hopeyouguessedmyname Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my great engineer! That was epic and gorgeous and intricate andlots of adjectives I'm not smart enough to remember lol

I had chillbumps just a few words in that never stopped until I finished. Truly amazing lady and a sign of your talent. Its like a madlibs of the most poetic names ever. Aaaaand, I got a mention;)
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