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She leaves the window to let the rain in. She watches the lazy river form and fall, seeping into the designer wallpaper and staining it. She watched the rain tug at the seams of the walls and imagined the room coming undone around her. She imagined the ceiling caving in and crushing her. She lay still and watched the rain fall. She lay still and tried not to breathe, to burn, to break.
I am simultaneously paralysed with depression and writhing with anger. Fucking fucking fucking FUCKING unbearable. I hate my life.
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izfish Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You hcanneled it well, even though it immesely sucks.
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
It really really does.
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foxx Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What did you do when the room was gone?
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Hibernated
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foxx Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What will it take to wake you up?
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LadyLincoln Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I hate that you're hurting. I love you, even on your worst days, honey. Stay strong. :heart:
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NovoAevum Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Creative is one word to describe this, but that doesn't quite fit this. I as well suffer from depression though recently it's improved to an extent, writing is such a wonderful vent. A very, VERY powerful write you've conjured up.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know those days. Maybe not in the exact strength as yours, but I definitely know them. Stay strong. :heart: We love you.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist
I will start with the writing I like the imagery this presents it's very very good =)
As I stated a min ago on another of yours what if anything can I do to help
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NamelessShe Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's one of the worst feelings. I'm in a similar state of mind about half the time. People don't get how hard it is to breathe when you feel like that. How hard to just think.

Your writing is powerful. :heart:
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